Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Final Grades

The final grades have been posted. Look on BlackBoard. To determine your final grade, look at the "total" score. 
A = 540-666
B = 400-539
C = 300-399
D = 200-299
F = All scores below 199
Please let me know if you have questions. Thank you for a wonderful semester.

Thursday, December 8, 2011

Thursday, December 8, 2011

Class Work

1. You will have the entire period to work on the exam. You were given an assignment sheet on Tuesday. It is also available on Tuesday's blog post. Follow the instructions. You must turn in the paper by 9:45 am. You must be physically present to submit your exam.

Reminders
  • Use MLA formatting
  • Use EasyBib for the Works Cited page
  • Remember that the Works Cited page is a stand-alone page
  • Use in-text citations
  • Begin and end with an attention getter
  • Build your paper around the artifact. First person "I" is OK since this is a paper about you.
2. Turn in any essays that you have not given me yet.

Homework

Have a wonderful holiday. Enjoy the time off with family and friends.

Look for your grade on Monday. I will send a "to all" e-mail from BlackBoard as soon as the grades are ready. After you check BlackBoard, let me know if something seems to be missing or if the grade does not seem to be correct. All can be adjusted as appropriate and necessary.

Thank you for an outstanding semester.

Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Tuesday


Class Work

(Compelte an evaluation Q/A sheet.)

Submit your problem/solution essay.
1. Continue with the PowerPoint presentations. Please take notes.
2. Return essays - check to be sure all of your work has been submitted. Check BlackBoard to be sure that the grade on your essay shows up. Contact me ASAP if something is missing.
3. Prepare for the exam:

101 English Exam – Fall 2011

Note: You must be present the day of the exam. You may NOT e-mail the paper to me and then skip the class.

Inscribing a Personal Artifact
Don't let the title of this exercise fool you. Inscribing a personal artifact is not like ordering an engraved name plate to put on your suitcase, nor is it like your parents writing your address on the inside of your underwear. This is an exercise in personal archaeology—an opportunity to describe a personal object and explain what it says about you.
The following tips will help you complete the assignment below:
·         Focus on an overall insight or impression. In the drafting process, you will clarify what your object says about you. Focus your description of the object around that insight or impression. All the details you decide to include should be relevant to that focus.
·         Organize the description logically. You can structure your writing in many ways. You might describe each detail and explain what it says about you. You might describe the object entirely and then explain what it says about you. The details you choose first depend on your purpose. If you want to recreate the experience of seeing the object, for instance, you might begin with its most obvious feature and proceed to its least obvious feature.
·         Provide vivid descriptions and sensory details. If you have a digital camera, you might include a picture of the object. Either way, you have to create it for us using words. As you describe it, consider letting your attitude toward the object show through in your choice of words and details (e.g., "This baseball glove is triple stitched and made of genuine Black Angus leather. It is so soft and supple that it folds together as flat as a book.").
·         Conduct research. Find and share the history of the object. For example, if your object is a ring. Find out information about the first rings in history. What did they symbolize? Are there any famous rings? How does your ring compare to the rings in history emotionally and physically? Why are rings important? Keep track of your sources.
Assignment
To help you write, try asking yourself these questions:
·         Would people's opinions of you come from the object itself? For example, is it rare, valuable, or collectable?
·         Would their opinions come from its condition? Perhaps it's old and worn?
·         What would people think about the object's significance within the culture? Would it label you as a certain kind of person?
·         Would the artifact only have meaning for other people if they knew more about your individual life?
·         How do other similar artifacts found in history relate to you and your object?

During the revision process, work on connecting what the object is with what it tells others about you. Include the researched information about the other such objects.

Include a Works Cited page and in-text citations. Use MLA formatting.

When you are finished, this paper should be 3-5 pages long.

Homework
1. Conduct the research for your essay. Bring the research to class. Save a tree - put your work on a jump drive or e-mail it to yourself. You must include the history of such objects. How does your current object compare to those in history?
2. Begin the draft of your essay. Be sure you can describe your artifact in detail. You are the camera. Paint with your words.
3. Be sure you answer the question "why". Why is the artifact important?
4. Keep track of your sources.

Thursday, December 1, 2011

Thursday

Class Work

1. You may submit your essay today or on Tuesday. If you submit it today, you will earn three extra points.
2. Presentations
  • Scoring Rubric - fill in the information at the top and give it to me when you present
  • Notes Page - take notes on each presentation. You will submit this after all have presented. It will be graded. Bulleted notes are fine.
  • Good luck! Speak up. Look at the audience. Smile! Convince the audience that you have a great cause.
3. Reminder: The exam in next Thursday, December 8th. You MUST come to the exam or you will not pass the course. This is a policy of EMCC.

4. On Tuesday, December 6th, I will be explaining the exam and giving handouts for the exam. The handouts are not available electronically. You need to be in class on Tuesday.

Homework
1. If you have not finished your argumentative problem/solution essay, do so.

2. Locate at least two articles that relate to a health issue of interest to you. Be able to locate them in class or bring paper copies.

Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Class Work

1. Begin with the presentations of the GUM issues. Please return to your groups.
Assignment:

  • That/which/who
  • Punctuating Dialogue
  • Possessives
  • Numbers
  • Punctuating titles
  • Subject/verb agreement
Assignment: Prepare a poster or PowerPoint slide to share the rules. Provide a model sentence. Provide two "test" sentences.
2. Peer Editing of your essay

3. Peer Editing of the PowerPoint -

Here are the guidelines:
Slide #1: Title and Your Name
Slide #2: Identify the problem - make your claim
Slides 3, 4, 5: Explain the causes of the problem. This answers "because" and possibly gives evidence.
Slides 6, 7, 8: Explain the effects of the problem - This is more evidence.
Slides 9, 10, 11: Call to action - give the viewers concrete examples of what can be done and explain what difference their actions will make. (This section contains another claim, more reasons, and more evidence.
Slide 12: Works Cited page - This should look just like the Works Cited page in your essay.

A few more tips: http://www.lifehack.org/articles/technology/10-tips-for-more-effective-powerpoint-presentations.html

http://www.microsoft.com/atwork/skills/presentations.aspx

4. Sign up for presentations.  You MUST have your presentation saved on a jump-drive or burned to a CD. That is the only way to move quickly from one presentation to another.

5. Tips for presenting to a group - Let's create a list before looking at the recommendations from other sources.
http://www.ehow.com/how-to_4845368_deliver-effective-speeches.html

http://speakingcenter.uncg.edu/resources/tipsheets/delivery/presentationdeliverytips.pdf


Homework

Note:  Our exam is on December 8th. You MUST come to the exam or you will not pass the class. This is listed in the EMCC handbook.

1. Finish your essay. It is due on Thursday.
2. Finish your PowerPoint. SAVE IT ON A JUMP DRIVE. The presentations are on Thursday.

Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Tuesday

Class Work

1.  Let's look at the Works Cited page. Please print out your page if you have not already done so.
2. How is your essay coming along? What are your claims?  You will need two claims - one to prove a problem exists and one to prove that there is a solution.

3.Guidelines for a problem/solution essay: http://www.enotes.com/topics/how-write-problem-solution-essay

The draft is due on November 29th.  The final essay is due on December 6th.

4. Prepare a PowerPoint to share what you learned by writing your essay. These will be presented on December 1. A sign up sheet will be available on November 29th.

Guidelines:
Slide #1: Title and Your Name
Slide #2: Identify the problem - make your claim
Slides 3, 4, 5: Explain the causes of the problem. This answers "because" and possibly gives evidence.
Slides 6, 7, 8: Explain the effects of the problem - This is more evidence.
Slides 9, 10, 11: Call to action - give the viewers concrete examples of what can be done and explain what difference their actions will make. (This section contains another claim, more reasons, and more evidence.
Slide 12: Works Cited page - This should look just like the Works Cited page in your essay.


5.  GUM Group Work -
  • That/which/who
  • Punctuating Dialogue
  • Possessives
  • Numbers
  • Punctuating titles
  • Subject/verb agreement
Assignment: Prepare a poster or PowerPoint slide to share the rules. Provide a model sentence. Provide two "test" sentences.

Homework

See the green items above.''

Note:  Our exam is on December 8th. You MUST come to the exam or you will not pass the class. This is listed in the EMCC handbook.

Happy Thanksgiving! There is no class on Thursday, November 24th.

Thursday, November 17, 2011

Thursday

Class Work

1. Submit the reaction to the presentation.
2. Back to "Saving the Songs of the Sea" - Save the Last Word for Me
3.  Look for claims, reasons, and evidence in "Saving the Songs of the Sea."
4. Using humor to make a point" "So Earth Had This Boyfriend" (Handout only)
5. Return papers. . . please check BlackBoard to be sure your grade shows. If you do not receive a paper and no grade is posted, please see me.
6. Taking a look at GUM issues - group activity - share the knowledge
  • that/which/who
  • punctuating dialogue
  • possessives
  • use of numerals vs. numbers
  • punctuating titles
  • subject/verb agreement
6.  What is your major research topic? At this point in time, what is/are your claim(s)? What are your reasons? What evidence have you found?

Homework

What do you think about Global Warming? What would you claim? What are your reasons? What evidence do you have to support your belief? Write these down. Bring the list to class on Tuesday.

Continue with the research on the topic of your choice. Keep track of your sources on EasyBib or other Works Cited creation help. Print a paper copy. I will be checking the formatting.

Take a look at "How to Write a Critique."
See: http://www.cccmyc.edu.hk/subject/eng-dept/sba/doc/Writing%20a%20Documentary%20Review.pdf and
http://www-english.tamu.edu/pers/fac/muana/docureview.pdf

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Class Work

1. Discussion of An Inconvenient Truth - please refer to your Q/A sheet that is due today.
2. "The Bounty of the Sea" - what do you think?
3. "Saving the Songs of the Sea" - class activity
4. We will be going to the Center for Teaching and Learning to participate in a lecture on The Technological History of Cherokee Writing.  For homework, write a reaction to the presentation. This should be a paragraph or two. What did you learn? What do you think?

Homework
1. Continue working on your research.
2. Write your reaction to the presentation. See #4 above.

Monday, November 7, 2011

Tuesday, November 8. 2011

Class Work

Reminder: You must post the homework from Thrusday on MyCompLab today.

1. Begin by reading "The Bounty of the Sea" by Jacques Cousteau. Even though it is short, Cousteau makes powerful claims. Answer the Questions for Close Reading for homework. Submit your answers on MyCompLab. (Handout only)

2. View An Inconvenient Truth. It is a documentary. Watch for the following:

An Inconvenient Truth – Questions

After viewing the documentary, answer the following questions. This is due on Tuesday, November 15, 2011. Bring your answers to class. The questions are also available as a paper handout.

1.       Why does the film open and close with serene images of nature: lush green leaves and a gently flowing river on a sunny day, followed by Al Gore’s voice-over about this peaceful place? What is the impact on the viewer?
2.       In this film, Gore narrates a moment in 1989 when his six-year-old son dropped his father’s hand, ran into the street, and was severely injured. How does this personal story relate to Gore’s mission?
3.       Much of the film consists of scientific facts and charts. Think back and answer the following:
·         Why do we have global warming?
·         What is the relationship between carbon dioxide and temperature?
·         How does global warming contribute to an increase in the number and severity of storms, hurricanes, tornadoes, and typhoons?
·         How can global warming cause both violent precipitation as well as droughts?
4.       Explain the significance of each of these references from the film:
·         The findings of core drills
·         The thawing of the permafrost, the splitting of the Ward Hunt ice shelf, and the disappearance of the Larson ice shelf
·         The Arctic ice cap disappearing
·         The image of a canary in a coal mine
·         The image of the frog in the cooking pot
5.       Cite three ecological consequences of global warming in the animal and plant communities.
6.       Gore used quotations from several memorable people.  Explain how they apply to the topic of global warming.
·         Mark Twain: “What gets us into trouble is not what we don’t know; it’s what we know that just ain’t so.”
·         Upton Sinclair: “It is difficult to get a man to understand something when his salary depends upon his not understanding it.” Consider citing specific ways that this statement is illustrated throughout this film.
·         Stephen Pacala and Robert Socolow in Science magazine: “Humanity already possesses the fundamental scientific, technical, and industrial know-how to solve the carbon and climate problems.”
7.       Explain the significance of the film’s title An Inconvenient Truth.

Homework
1. Submit the answers to the Questions for Close Reading on MyCompLab. They are due on Thursday, November 10, 2011.
2. Continue working on your own research. Be sure to keep track of your sources!
         

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Class Work

Looking back - something new on body art . . . http://finance.yahoo.com/blogs/power-your-future/visible-tattoos-other-corporate-no-nos-193828198.html

1. Let's take a look at "Let's Talk About Sex" by Anna Quindlen. 9Write Now, pp. 203-205
Look for: claims, reasons, and evidence. (See p. 202 in Write Now.) Is the topic arguable? Are there two sides? What is Quindlen's main point? Where is it stated?

 How did Quindlen handle opposing points of view? Is she likely to convince the opposition? Explain.2. Visual arguments - what do you see? p. 211

3. Group Activity- each group will be assigned a topic. Decide which side your group will argue.(p. 212 - #2) Convince us. using the broad topics assigned, develop a claim. What evidence is available? (Search the Internet. Search the sources available in My Comp Lab. Search what is available in the library resources. You may NOT include Wikipedia as a source.) Is there enough information? See p. 202 to review Claims, reasons, and evidence.

Once your group has a claim, provide a reason as an explanation in support of your claim. (Answer "why?" Use "because.")

Now, find some evidence. Look for facts, statements, remarks from authorities, statistics, etc. Numbers speak volumes!

Be ready to share with the rest of the class.

4. What is your topic? Are there others in the class working on your topic? Join together as a group to discuss.  If you have a "stand alone" topic, you with join with others to share.
  • What sources did you locate. Justify each as a "good" source. What makes it the best?
  • What does the opposition know?
  • Will you be convincing a friendly or hostile audience?  How old are they? What is their experience with the topic? Why do they need your information? What do they know about your topic already? Is age a factor? What do they need to know to be convinced?
  • Share your paragraph about the audience with the group. (Submit this paragraph.)

5. Review the student sample on pp. 216-229. Look for claims, reasons, and evidence. Make a list of each. What did you find?

6. Take a look at p. 91 for a list of other terms associated with arguments. Pay careful attention to claims, reasons, evidence, and appeals.

Homework
1.  Read "Meltdown: Running Out of Time on Global Warming" pp. 92-99. Notice the flow charts.  
2. Review the guidelines for writing arguments:
http://www.roanestate.edu/owl/argument.html ( Review the information about writing arguments. Read one of the student samples at this site. List the claims, reasons, and note the evidence. You may do this as a flow chart if you wish.)

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/argument.htm (This site also has the "Cry Wolf" essay with annotations. It guides you through the essay with questions and comments.)

3. Continue working on the research for your topic. Write a thesis statement. This is your major claim. Submit your thesis statement on MyCompLab. The link is ready for your work. Also tell me your reasons and note the most important information found to date.
 
Use this form:
Thesis/claim:
 
Reasons:
 
Evidence:

Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Class Work

1. Let's look at the homework. What topics are of interest: at school, in the neighborhood, in the valley, in the state, across the nation, around the world? At your table, create a list of at least five for each of the categories listed. Check the magazines. What are the "big" topics?

2. Did you find a topic of interest to you? Why did you select that topic? Why is it important? What do you hope to change?

3.  Look for a topic - see pp. 206-207 in Write Now. Select a topic to support or refute. Complete the "Ask Question & Make Decisions" questions with your topic in mind.
4. This was the homework: #1 Read the editorials for at least two days. Make a list of the topics of interest. Select one letter and discuss its success or failure to convince. What topic did you select? Why?#2. Complete this question as written in the book. What was your favorite t-shirt, bumper sticker, or billboard "argument?" What made it effective?#3. Instead of writing a paragraph, make a +/- list. What are the arguments for your selected topic? What are the arguments against your selected topic? Take out your +/- list and share it with your group. #4 Complete #4 as written in the book. What did you find? What arguments are effective?

Let's discuss.

5. Let's take a look at "Let's Talk About Sex" by Anna Quindlen. 9Write Now, pp. 203-205
Look for: claims, reasons, and evidence. (See p. 202 in Write Now.) Is the topic arguable? Are there two sides? What is Quindlen's main point? Where is it stated?

6. How did Quindlen handle opposing points of view? Is she likely to convince the opposition? Explain.

7. Visual arguments - what do you see? p. 211

8. Group Activity: p. 212 - #2. Convince us. Select one of the broad topics listed or select an agreed up topic for your group. Develop a claim. What evidence is available? (Search the Internet. Search the sources available in My Comp Lab. Search what is available in the library resources. You may NOT include Wikipedia as a source.) Is there enough information?

Homework
1. Follow the guidelines on pp. 213-214 to help you study your topic. Your job is to become an instant expert on the topic of your choice. You must have at least five good sources. You need to identify the opposition and know what they believe and know.

2. Determine if you will be writing for a friendly or hostile audience. Write a paragraph describing that audience. How old are they? What is their experience with the topic? Why do they need your information? What do they know about your topic already? Is age a factor? What do they need to know to be convinced?

3. Read the student sample on pp. 216-129. Look for claims, reasons, and evidenc. Make a list of each.

Thursday, October 27, 2011

Thursday, October 27, 2011

Class Work

 
1. The final copy of the essay is due today. Place the final copy on top of the draft and the peer editing notes.
2. Discussion/Group Study of the readings:
Reality TV, Goolers, and YOU!
 
A. "When the Patient Is a Googler" by Scott Haig http://www.time.com/time/health/article/0%2C8599%2C1681838%2C00.html
B. "Is There a Doctor in the Mouse?" by Parika http://www.salon.com/2008/01/10/web_doctor/
C. "Why Reality TV is Good for Us" by James Poniewozik http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0%2C9171%2C421047%2C00.html
D. "When Reality TV Gets Too Real" by Jeremy W. Peters http://www.nytimes.com/2007/10/08/business/media/08reality.html?pagewanted=print

3. Writing time. . . Persuasive/Argumemtative Writing
Homework
4. Look for a topic - see pp. 206-207 in Write Now. Select a topic to support or refute. Complete the "Ask Question & Make Decisions" questions with your topic in mind.

#1 Read the editorials for at least two days. Make a list of the topics of interest. Select one letter and discuss its success or failure to convince.
#2. Complete this question as written in the book.
#3. Instead of writing a paragraph, make a +/- list. What are the arguments for your selected topic? What are the arguments against your selected topic?
#4 Complete #4 as written in the book.

 
  

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Class Work

1. Take out the draft of your Definition Essay - paper or electronic.
2. Peer Editing Activity: What was included in the Definition Draft?
3. Let's meet the FANBOYS and learn to avoid Run-on sentences and Comma Splices. (Take Notes)
4. PowerPoint: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/powerpoint.htm
5.  Practice: # 75, 76, and #77 at: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm
6. MLA Formatting: http://www.dianahacker.com/pdfs/hacker-Daly-MLA.pdf

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Reality TV, Goolers, and YOU!

A. "When the Patient Is a Googler" by Scott Haig http://www.time.com/time/health/article/0%2C8599%2C1681838%2C00.html
B. "Is There a Doctor in the Mouse?" by Parika http://www.salon.com/2008/01/10/web_doctor/
C. "Why Reality TV is Good for Us" by James Poniewozik http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0%2C9171%2C421047%2C00.html
D. "When Reality TV Gets Too Real" by Jeremy W. Peters http://www.nytimes.com/2007/10/08/business/media/08reality.html?pagewanted=print

Homework
Finish your Definition Essay. Be sure you use MLA formatting. Bring the peer editing sheet to class with you.

Finish reading about Googling and Reality TV. What do you think? Do you Google/Yahoo/ Bing information when an discussion with an expert would serve you better? Do you watch Reality TV? Do your friends? What's the harm?  (Respond in writing. These are "thought notes."

Thursday, October 20, 2011

October 20, 2011 - Thursday

Class Work
1. Let's review the sample outline:
 http://www.northland.cc.mn.us/owl/Doing%20the%20definition%20essay.htm
Also see pp. 446-448 in Write Now.
2. Introductions - how will you capture the attention of your readers?
See pp. 424-426 in Write Now.  Read the information. Make a bulleted or numbered list of the ten most important tips from the pages. (Five for Introductions/five for Conclusions)
http://lklivingston.tripod.com/essay/intro.html
Thesis: http://lklivingston.tripod.com/essay/thesis.html
3. Let's look at one more example of a definition paper: (Handout: May 26, 1999) This one is developed with a narrative. Think about it . . . how could you weave a story into your essay?)

4.. Let's meet the FANBOYS and learn to avoid Run-on sentences and Comma Splices. (Take Notes)
5. PowerPoint: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/powerpoint.htm
6. Practice: # 75, 76, and #77 at: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm
Homework
1.  Write the draft of your Definition Essay. Bring a paper copy to class. If you prefer, you may have an electronic copy. Be sure to e-mail it to yourself so that you will have it with you. Sometimes Jump Drives skip class!

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

October 18, 2011 - Tuesday

Class Work
1. Share research progress to date. Write your topic on the front board. We will group by "like" topics if possible. Please sign your name by the topic.
Take out your graphic organizers for the definition paper.  Share the following at your table:
A. Topic
B. Most interesting information
C. Boxes left to fill
D. Why you selected that term
2.  Are you keeping track of your sources? If not, please begin a new project on EasyBib. If you are using another source, save the information there.
3. Let's take a look at sample Definition Essays
A. "What is a Yankee?" http://www.northland.cc.mn.us/owl/Doing%20the%20definition%20essay.htm
B. "A Few of My Favorite Things" (Handout)
C. "Break It to 'Em Gently" (Handout)

4. Here are some quick guidelines for writing a Definition Essay: http://www.northland.cc.mn.us/owl/Doing%20the%20definition%20essay.htm
Also see pp. 446-448 in Write Now.
5. Let's meet the FANBOYS and learn to avoid Run-on sentences and Comma Splices. (Take Notes)
6. PowerPoint: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/powerpoint.htm
7. Practice: # 75, 76, and #77 at: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm
8. I have some of the "Quotation" essays ready for you. Check BlackBoard for your grade. If you do not see a grade, please see me.

Homework
1.  Work on your definition essay. Create an outline like the sample in #4 above. Continue your research. Bring our outline to class on Thursday.

Thursday, October 13, 2011

October 13, 2011 - Thursday

Class Work


1. Submit your essay.
  • Put the final copy on top. Be sure you have the Works Cited page. Be sure you have used MLA formatting.
  • Attach the draft
  • Attach the peer editing comments
2. Relationships . . . What's Love Got to Do with It? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pu8KFlfzk3Y&ob=av2e
3. How does our society describe the best man or best woman for a date?
4. How has the definition changed over the last 100 years?
5. What is a good "date?"
6. How has the Internet changed dating, or has it?
7. http://www.readersdigest.com.au/fantasy-love "Fantasy Love" by Celeste Biever
"Virtual Love" by Meghan Daum http://www.newyorker.com/archive/1997/08/25/1997_08_25_080_TNY_CARDS_000378836

8. Begin to define a term related to relationships - brainstorm ideas in class

Homework
1. Read "Virtual Love" . The link is in #7 above.
2. Select a term to define.
3. Begin your Definition research.

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Class Work

1. Please take out your rough draft. You may have a paper copy or you may call it up on the computer.
2.  What did you discover? What questions did you answer? Go to the board and post one of your questions. If somebody else has already listed your question, just put your initials by it.

3. You need to work with three other students for this Peer Editing activity.
The items listed in blue correspond to Content and Clarity on the EMCC Writing Rubric. The items listed in green refer to Citation Issues under Editing. The items in orange fall under Formatting and Mechanics issues. These will be the tasks of the three readers.
  • An introduction that captures the attention of the audience
  • The history of your topic
  • Details about how your topic has changed over time
  • Your personal example with dialog
  • A memorable conclusion
  • Works Cited page
  • In-text citations . . . we will work on these on Tuesday.
  • Use MLA formatting
  • Correct grammar, usage, and mechanics are expected.
4. Before we begin, let's take a look at In-Text Citations.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/02/
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/research/mlaparen.html
and pp. 384+ in Write Now.

Sample Essay: http://www.dianahacker.com/pdfs/hacker-Daly-MLA.pdf
and pp. 394+ in Write Now.

5. Let's also take another look at a Works Cited page: p. 399 in Write Now.
http://www.dianahacker.com/pdfs/hacker-Daly-MLA.pdf

6. Let's take a look at MyCompLab and take some time to complete the Diagnostic test.

7. Did you try WriteClick with your essay? Consider using the tool.

Homework
1. Finish your essay. Make revisions. You must bring a paper copy to submit. Also bring the Peer Editing comment sheet. It is due on Thursday, October 13, 2011.
2. Finish the Diagnostic 1 assignment on MyComp Lab.

Thursday, October 6, 2011

October 6, 2011

Class Work

1. What is your story? (Group sharing - groups of four)
2. How is your research coming along? What questions have you answered?
Ex:
  • What is the history of hair design? (Topic: hair styles)
  • Where did plastic surgery begin? (Topic: plastic surgery)
  • How have clothing styles changed over the last 100 years? What caused the changes? (Think about history. What was happening in the nation/world?) (Topic: Clothing styles)
  • How has footwear evolved? (Topic: shoes or athletic shoes)
  • What graphic information is available? Find pictures. Keep track of the sources.
3. Now, generate at least three additional questions to investigate. Think about ways to use your personal example with the research. Make the two fit together.
4. Let's look at three person example essays. (Handouts - not all are available electronically.) Pay attention to the use of dialog. How is conversation punctuated? What are the rules? See pp. 432-433 in Write Now.
  • "Fish Cheeks" by Amy Tan
  • "If Only" by Paul Monahan
  • "I Know It's an Object, But Is It D'Art?"
  • "An Expert from An American Childhood"  by Annie Dillard - pp. 124-125 in Write Now.
5. Let's practice writing dialogue. You need a partner.

Homework

1. Finish your research. Keep track of your sources on EasyBib or by adding all of the information to the MyCompLab bibliography helper. www.easybib.com
Remember that you must register for EasyBib. It is free. Be sure you name the new project. Otherwise, the program doesn't know that you want to keep it. Don't forget to click all of the buttons to create the Works Cited page. Bring a copy of your Works Cited page to class on Tuesday.
2. Write the draft of your essay. You need to merge your personal example and your research into a seamless essay.
3. In this essay you need to include:
  • An introduction that captures the attention of the audience
  • The history of your topic
  • Details about how your topic has changed over time
  • Your personal example with dialog
  • A memorable conclusion
  • Works Cited page
  • In-text citations . . . we will work on these on Tuesday.
4. Bring a paper copy of your work to class or be sure you can get to it electronically. E-mail it to yourself as an attachment. That is the best way to be sure you have it.

Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Class Work

1. Getting to know the Write Now on-line features . . . we have a guest speaker. You must have your personal code to join the class on-line.

This was the homework:

Read http://www1.salon.com/health/feature/1999/06/23/tattoo/print.html "Every tattoo tells a story. .." from "Under My Skin" by Jon Bowen
2.Think about it . . . On a more personal note, explain why you do or do not have piercings, tattoos, or other body art. What is your story?
3. Also, look up the history of tattoos. Where did they begin? Why were they used? Why were they important? Note your sources. Start a new Works Cited list at Easybib.com. Title it: Body Art. Note where you located your information on the history of tattoos. (2 sources.)
4. Locate two additional articles about body art/tattoos. Add the sources to Easybib. Highlight important words, lines, and phrases. Be prepared to share on Thursday.
5. If possible, conduct an interview with someone who has piercings, tattoos, or other body art. Add the source to Easybib. Ask the normal Who, What, When, Where, Why, and How questions that news reporters ask. Also, ask for permission to quote them in an upcoming essay for class.

What did you discover by doing the homework?

Writing a personal experience essay. You need dialogue. Let's practice.
http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/crafttechnique/tp/dialogue.htm
http://www.teacher2b.com/creative/dialogue1.htm

Sample personal essay: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/personal.htm

Homework
Write about a personal experience you experienced with "body art." What is your story? Remember that even hair styles are forms of body art. Include dialogue.

Thursday, September 29, 2011

September 29, 2011

Class Work

1.  What did you write? What questions remain?
2.  Work with a group of four to review your paper and the rubric.
3. Revision time.
4. Let's log on to EasyBib: http://www.easybib.com/
5. Take a look around the room - what body art is obvious? Why do humans feel the need to decorate the natural body?

Conduct an interview with someone who has piercings, tattoos, or other body art. Add the source to Easybib. Ask the normal Who, What, When, Where, Why, and How questions that news reporters ask. Also, ask for permission to quote them in an upcoming essay for class.
6. Looking at articles related to body art . . . "On Teenagers and Tattoos" p. 24 and "Under My Skin" p. 29 in Between Worlds.  (Class discussion activity)
7. Should body art be accepted by society? Justify your response.
8. Should children be allowed to have piercings and tattoos? Why/why not? At what age is is appropriate? Is it ever appropriate for children to be given tattoos or piercings without their permission? Explain.

Homework

1. Read http://www1.salon.com/health/feature/1999/06/23/tattoo/print.html "Every tattoo tells a story. .." from "Under My Skin" by Jon Bowen
2.Think about it . . . On a more personal note, explain why you do or do not have piercings, tattoos, or other body art. What is your story?
3. Also, look up the history of tattoos. Where did they begin? Why were they used? Why were they important? Note your sources. Start a new Works Cited list at Easybib.com. Title it: Body Art. Note where you located your information on the history of tattoos. (2 sources.)
4. Locate two additional articles about body art/tattoos. Add the sources to Easybib. Highlight important words, lines, and phrases. Be prepared to share on Thursday.
5. If possible, conduct an interview with someone who has piercings, tattoos, or other body art. Add the source to Easybib. Ask the normal Who, What, When, Where, Why, and How questions that news reporters ask. Also, ask for permission to quote them in an upcoming essay for class.

Monday, September 26, 2011

September 27, 2011 - Tuesday

Welcome to the first day of class!

Class Work

1. Syllabus Review
Syllabus English 101-0105 #19428 – Tu/Thurs 8:00-9:50AM Mariposa 135
September 27-Dec 8, 2011
ESTRELLA MOUNTAIN COMMUNITY COLLEGE
First – Year Composition – 3 Credit Hours – English 101 – Section 0065
Instructor: Mrs. Patricia Eaton

Adjunct Office: 623- 935-8139 in Montezuma Hall 119 (You may phone the office and leave a message for me between 8:00 am and 5:00 pm on weekdays. Papers may be left with Ms. Terri Propes or put into the night drop box after hours.)

Required Texts:

Between Worlds: A Reader, Rhetoric, and Handbook, Susan Bachmann and Melinda Barth Editor, 2010 Edition or 2012 Edition.
Write Now by Daniel Anderson You MUST have your own copy of the book and use the personal code. The book is available in the campus bookstore.
Note: This syllabus is subject to change based upon the progress of the class. Daily updates will be provided on the BLOG.  If you miss a class, be sure to contact me by e-mail and ask for a copy of the daily information.
Office Hours: By appointment – my schedule is flexible.
Course Description
(Prerequisite: English placement test score of a grade of “C” or better in English 071.)
English 101 focuses on the development of writing skills through a process of thinking, researching, planning, writing, revising, editing, and reviewing expository essays. This course will require students to analyze and respond to text-based writing. Students will be responsible for writing a minimum of six critical essays to develop skills in textual analysis, written expression, and proper documentation. These essays will be word-processed and properly documented. In completing the required essays, students will demonstrate the ability to read difficult material with comprehension; to process information through quotation, summary, and paraphrase; and to integrate the ideas of others into their own sustained written examination of a subject.

Course Competencies
1.       Analyze specific rhetorical contexts, including circumstance, purpose, topic, audience, and writer as well as the writing’s ethical, political, and cultural implications.
2. Organize writing to support a central idea through unity, coherence, and logical development appropriate to a specific writing context.
3. Use appropriate conventions in writing, including consistent voice, tone, diction, grammar, and mechanics.
4. Summarize, paraphrase and quote from sources to maintain academic integrity and to develop and support one’s own ideas.
5. Use feedback obtained from peer review, instructor comments and/or other resources to revise writing.
6. Assess one’s own writing strengths and identify strategies for improvement through instructor conference, portfolio review, written evaluation, and/or other methods.
7. Generate, format, and edit writing using appropriate technologies.
Abilities: Critical thinking and effective communication have been identified as essential to student success and will be integrated into this course. Critical thinking is defined as the ability to identify a problem, develop and implement strategies, evaluate information, reach conclusion, and respond to a problem. Effective communication is defined as the ability to respond to an audience, demonstrate clear sense of purpose, organize information, and deliver information using appropriate language.

Attendance Policy: Active participation is expected for successful completion in this course. In the event of an absence, students are expected to contact me by e-mail: Patricia.Eaton@estrellamountain.edu and go to www.eatonenglish101.blogspot.com for daily updates for the course.
Students are expected to complete any homework for the missed day by the next class period.
Important FYI:
Attendance policy (typically, students are allowed the number of unofficial absences according to the number of times a class meets per week; ex: TR, students are allowed two unofficial absences and may be dropped after that.)
2.3.2 Attendance
  • Only persons who are registered for a class at any of the Maricopa Community Colleges may attend that class. Attendance requirements are determined by the course instructor. Students who do not meet the attendance requirement as determined by the course instructor may be withdrawn.
  • Students who fail to attend the first scheduled class meeting, or to contact the instructor regarding absence before the first scheduled class meeting may, at the option of the instructor, be withdrawn.
  • At the beginning of each course, each faculty member will provide students with written attendance requirements. It is the student's responsibility to consult with the instructor regarding official or unofficial absences. Absences begin to accumulate with the first scheduled class meeting.
  • Students bear the responsibility of notifying the Admissions and Records Office/Office of Student Enrollment Services when they discontinue studies in a course or at the college. 
Late Work: Make-ups of in-class writing assignments are at the instructor’s discretion. Students turning their work in after the due date may be penalized by having the grade lowered five points per day in fairness to those students who met the deadline.
Tape Recordings and/or Video Recordings: In order to tape any class session, a student must first seek permission from the instructor. In order to tape group discussions, permission must be given by the instructor and the students in the group.
Cell Phones: Cell phones must be turned off or placed on “vibrate” during class. At no time should a student be sending text messages, sending e-mails, listening to music, or carrying on conversations. In the event of an emergency call, please excuse yourself from the room, take care of the situation, and quietly return to class.
Student Disabilities: If a student has a disability that requires special accommodations, please let me know as soon as possible. “Students with disabilities are encouraged to contact the DRS office at the beginning of the admissions process to discuss accommodation needs and to request an alternate format of printed materials. Some accommodation may require three to four weeks notification. For more information, call 623-935-8935 V?TTY, or contact the EMCC DRS office in Komatke Hall 119, or e-mail: Ramona.shingler@emcmail.maricopa.edu.”
Student Support Services: For writing assistance in the Learning Enhancement Center, students should contact Susan Malmo, Writing Center Coordinator, at 623-935-8419. The Writing Center is located on the first floor of Estrella Hall.
Grading Scale:
·         Four-five documented essays of 3-5 pages will be written exploring various modes of discourse. Each counts as 100 points each. I use the EMCC Writing Rubric. You may reach the rubric on BlackBoard. I will also provide a paper copy with each written assignment.
·         One PowerPoint oral presentation: 100 points
·         Exam essay - the exam counts as a regular essay. Note that all students must attend class on the day of the exam. This is an EMCC policy.
·         Class participation = 100 points
A= 90-100%
B=80-89%
C=70-79%
D=60-69%
F=0-59%
Plagiarism: Plagiarism is the process of borrowing information from other sources or individuals without giving credit. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Essays will not be accepted unless accompanied by pre-writing exercises, notes, drafts, peer and self-editing marks, etc. This paper trail is proof of a student’s own work. Proof of plagiarism will result in a zero for the assignment.
Classroom Misconduct: Students must read the “Code of Student Conduct” in the new Student Handbook for an understanding of what will be expected within the academic setting.

2.3.11 Academic Misconduct
  1. Definitions
    1. Academic Misconduct - includes misconduct associated with the classroom, laboratory or clinical learning process. Examples of academic misconduct include, but are not limited to, cheating, plagiarism, excessive absences, use of abusive or profane language, and disruptive and/or threatening behavior.
    2. Cheating - includes, but is not limited to, (a) use of any unauthorized assistance in taking quizzes, tests, assessment tests or examinations; (b) dependence upon the aid of sources beyond those authorized by the faculty member in writing papers, preparing reports, solving problems, or carrying out other assignments; or (c) the acquisition, without permission, of tests or other academic material belonging to a member of the college faculty or staff.
    3. Plagiarism - includes, but is not limited to, the use of paraphrase or direct quotation of the published or unpublished work of another person without full and clear acknowledgment. It also includes the unacknowledged use of materials prepared by another person or agency engaged in the selling of term papers or other academic materials. Information gathered from the internet and not properly identified is also considered plagiarism.

Final Thoughts: This course is designed to help you become a better writer, researcher, and reader. You will get out of the course what you put into it. You are expected to actively participate in readings, discussions, debates, and reports. Come to class prepared with readings and with required writings and notes. Conduct thorough research. At all times, give credit to the source of information by using proper documentation. Be on time. Be positive. Ask questions. Contribute your thoughts. Be tolerant of others and of ideas that differ from your own.

FYI: Exam schedule – please check the exam schedule at: http://www.estrellamountain.edu/academics/final-exam-schedule .
2. Getting to know you . . . What is writing to you?
What is writing?
  • Why write?
  • When is writing important?
  • Are there different types of writing?
  • What is good writing?
  • What kind of a writer are you?
  • What personal experiences, good and bad, have you had with writing?

3. There are varied opinions about writing. Visit http://www.quotegarden.com/writing.htm

and locate a quotation that you feel best defines your idea of writing.

4. Explain your quotation to the others at your table.

5. This quotation will be the focus of your first compostion for this course.

Use the quotation you selected as the basis for an introductory essay about you and your experiences as a writer. You must include at least one "early writing memory" in this essay. (We will work on memoir writing on Thursday.) In addition, you need to clearly show how you feel about writing. Toward the end of your paper, tell what your strengths are and what you can contribute to the class. Also, explain what you still need to learn and what you hope to gain from the class besides a passing grade.

Homework
Read Chapter 5 in Write Now - Writing Memoirs - p. 122+
Also take a look at the instructions for personal writing at:
For Thursday, be ready to give me a one sentence definition of personal writing.
Bring a draft of your Writing Is essay to class. This may be on paper, or if you wish to "go green," bring a copy on your jump drive or e-mail it to yourself so that you can call it up on the computer once you get to class.